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"Your own example does not work as advertised."
Informative, but nothing that isn't already available and Google-able. Plus, your own attempts to hide the pointer don't work on the second screen, where you select the ActionScript text -- apparently this only hides the normal and hand pointers. It might be useful, if you can find a way to make that work, to include the code for that. Bonus points if you can use a different pointer image for text selection.
Also there was some flagrantly bad grammar/punctuation. Protip: If you're going to make something that's mostly text, at least make sure it's written properly.
Author's Response:
oh yeh! shit! only just notist! :O
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Did I catch a WHARRGARBL in the credits? I believe I did. That probably shouldn't have amused me as much as it did.
I liked the integration of all those characters we haven't seen in a while. And how it wasn't just all about the characters fucking (except Puppy, and really it'd be weird if he DIDN'T have a sex plot going). Nice to see some character development with Donkey, too. If that's what that was.
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Couldn't finish it. The "voice" of the main character was just too annoying.
Incidentally, please leave the Zelda-style "voice acting" to Zelda parodies. If you can be bothered to get Flash, you can be bothered to get a microphone.
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You need to fix it so it doesn't loop, and it should be "the O'Briens' home", not "the O'Brien's home". Other than that I have no opinion.
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I'm not really sure what I just watched, but it was put together pretty well. Liked the simple, silhouette style -- it's sort of "artsy", which I suspect is what you were going for. In the future I might use the medium- or high-quality blur filters in some places, particularly the fog.
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Holy crap, that thing was rushy. You need to put some pauses in there. Like, a lot of them. I didn't have half enough time to read most of those messages.
Author's Response:
Updated with slower speed.
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Not bad. I liked the part where the bullet was ricocheting off the walls and a duplicate of the main character randomly appeared. One thing, though: in some places you used Dynamic Text instead of Static Text by mistake; that's why it's thicker and can be selected with the mouse. The first one was actually a little harder to read because of that. Might want to fix it and re-upload.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I fixed something right now, I deleted the Spanish version cause I noticed that when clicking ''CONTINUE TO THE MOVIE'' it randomly appeared in another scene from any of the chapters, and not in the intro. And yeah, I will fix the first text of the movie maybe. Not today cause I've been workin on this all day long xD But thank you for the support and the recommendations ^^
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Just a tip though: To keep it from looping at the end, put a keyframe on the last frame (any layer will work), open up the Actions pane, and type:
stop();
You can test it with Ctrl+Enter.
Author's Response:
Alright thank you :]
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You people really need to preview these things with Ctrl-Enter before you submit.
Author's Response:
hey dude i tried to put the newgrounds preloader but i can't change the file, if you have any problems just wait, the files is 7mb long
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Just so you know, you can just insta-beat it by clicking the red button again instead of PLAY, right at the beginning.
Author's Response:
that was an accident
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